Flapping his wings, flying high…wish I were a seagull…where is the dark sea now, to take me in its kingdom? I wanna swim, I wanna fly, I want….
But the seagull flew away…
Soft sand…bitter colg breeze…raindrops on a seagull’s feathers. I look up at the sky…is that the seagull crying?
Trapped in this land of peace….The air si frozen now, the waves hurt my eyes…
And the seagull flew away…
Rocks in the middle of the sea…no sound, nothing is moving…Wish I xould breath inside this seagull’s body.. Surrendered by loneliness…Why am I here?
It looks as if all froze…the seagull turns his head…There’s my friend, the sun! Please, don’t go away, not you! You can beat the sunset! Stay with me!
It looked at a flap of wing’s distance…the seagull flew..
Where are you going?
It’s getting dark now…the sunset is almost over….and the seagull is still flying towards the dying sun…Wish I could be the horizon…But the shadows are taking over, and the seagull disspears into the sea….
He wanted the sea, but the sea got him…
Why running for the sun, when we could open our eyes and see it was right here?
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gewissen // martie 27, 2007 la 12:02 am
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Soft sand… you and me…
The sea… you and me…
The sun… you and me…
Flying… you… and me.
You and I
Forever in love, you and I!
You and I are ONE seagull… si sa stii ca e ceva cu pescarusii, de am scris amandoi despre ei
Crazy boy and crazy girl, no?
Open your eyes, baby, and see I’m here, see how happy I am with u and because of u. I want to share my whole life with u… Let’s fly away together!
Si un pic de analiza stilistica… Imi place tonul si frecventa ridicata a punctelor de suspensie. Multe vibratii sufletesti si multe cuvinte mari… shadows, dying, sun, horizon, etc. Am simtit cum zbor si eu cu pescarusul si… cum dispare… si daca nu am plans, sigur e pentru ca simteam ca amandoi simtim acelasi pescarus… nu stiu sa spun de ce… Want to fly together?:)
Soft sand… soft sand… love… making love… I’m speechless…